Hahaha, too cute! I love the coloring job; Kirara looks so adorable!
The only thing I actually see that's wrong with it, is that their eyes are too close together. If they were just a little bit further apart, they would all look very manga-esque. I like it, though! It's something I haven't ever seen before. :3
I think it's a great job. The only thing that bothers me is the highlights on Inu's and Shippo's hair. It's kind of flat compared to the others. Oh, and Inuyasha's face is shaded in the wrong direction, but that's OK. I like it anyway!
Yupp, true about the hair. I inked the others hair by hand (since I wasn't planning on coloring it in the first place) and when it came to Shippo and Inuyasha I just didn't have the patience to do it better Haha, about IY face, since he is watching at the other direction it just went natural that I shadowed his face wrongly. Might need to change that